Want employees to actually read your internal comms? Stop writing like a corporate.
- jennymasters
- Mar 10
- 1 min read

Your employees don’t want to read:
“We are pleased to announce a new initiative aimed at driving collaboration.”
They want:
“Big news: We’re making teamwork easier. Here’s how ”
3 quick fixes for better internal comms:
Write like a human—ditch the jargon.
Make it scannable—shorter paragraphs, bold key points.
Give them a reason to care—how does this impact them?
A great leader once advised me to "take my jacket off".
I've never put mine back on.
What’s your go-to trick for grabbing attention?
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